Friday, 13 May 2016

Hansel and Jack in the lost forest

Title: Hansel & Jack in the lost forest.

One morning Hansel mother said to look out the window, as he turned to look out the window,he saw children playing and having fun together. Hansel felt that he wanted to go outside so he went and opened the door and the two children stood in silence while waiting for Hansel to come outside, as he stood there a friend came along and introduced himself,’ “Hi, I'm Jack” “Hi I'm Hansel” so as they are introduced they started playing kicks and all of a sudden Jack kicked the ball far away into the woods.

Hay Jack should we pack our stuff before we go said Hansel and jack replied no because we are going to be so fast,neck minute,wait here while I get ready said Hansel Jack replies OK that fine with me. So as they went out searching for it in the woods, Hansel came by a deep voice far in the woods, as he turns to Jack he seyed “Did you hear that?” Said Hansel “I think you're dreaming.” Replies Jack, come on let’s go check it out, it won’t take for long we’ll be back fast before sunset.

It is now three hours said Jack, can we take a break cause I am hungry,  yes we can says Hansel“Do you have any lunch?” Jack said to Hansel. It is lucky I brought my bags cause my mum always says if you are going somewhere far you should pack everything you need. They sat down on a log and behind was a bush. Hansel was rolling down the hills so fast that Jack couldn't get him, although when Hansel got up he called Jack so many times he’d never respond, so Hansel looked around and from far he saw a candy house.

Jack finally heard Hansel Jack was running fast down the hill and while Hansel was going to the candy house.When Jack finally got down he yelled Hansel where are you jack was looking around until he saw Hansel eating the candy, Jack ran fast to Hansel and Jack said what are you doing? what do you think I'm doing Hansel said to jack I'm eating candy.A lady came out with a brooming the dust out the door she heard two kids or two adults.The lady came to the two people that was talking.talking. Hansel and Jack freaked out when they saw her and the lady did not introduce herself but she said if they are hungry Hansel said I am so hungry right now.As soon as they got inside the lady looked the doors and windows,she finally introduce herself.The witch said she is a witch and she turned herself into a witch with a wand they felt scared then the witch told Jack to get into the cage while Hansel is making the food for Jack the witch went to sleep but before she went to sleep she had locked down the candy house so they would dent escape out of the house.

Hansel had a idea to get Jack out of there and to get out of the house while the witch was sleeping.So she grabbed a knife and tried to open the cage but it didn't work,she tried getting the wand from the witch.she had took the wand and she got Jack out of the cage and unlocked the door.They started to run but Jack had to just one step and he was tired because he is to fat, so Hansel had to carry him.

The witch had woke up and she new she couldn't fly with her broom because she had lost her wand so she had to ran,she wasn't that fast but she new that they will slow down. Hansel and Jack had reached home and they told Jack's mum and so his mum died because of the witch.

                          The end


Danni Stone said...

Wow Mateaki, I did not see that ending coming! What an imagination you have, I like how you thought about the things that the characters would do - they packed a bag, the witch lost her wand. This detail was great to read.

Rachel Williamson said...

Hi Mateaki,

I couldn't agree more with Ms. Stone. You have a great imagination and are clearly really creative! If you would like to do some more creative reading and writing this holiday, please consider joining the Winter Learning Journey blogging programme. It's really fun!

To join, all you have to do is log onto the Winter Learning website, click on the "Weekly Activities" tab, scroll down and choose an activity that interests you. You then blog about it on your blog site and I will read it, comment and give you points. You'll earn a certificate and a badge and, if you one of the 'Top 3 bloggers' you will also earn a great prize at the end of the holiday!

I'll check back in a couple of days to see if you've chosen to take up the challenge and join the Winter Learning Journey programme.

Hope to see you online this holiday :)

Cheers, Rachel

Alfred said...

Well done Mat you did a very great Job keep up the great work. :)

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